peer review.

What is he good at :

The author is doing good job of understanding the story. He know what is the poem talk about. The introduction is grabbing people attention, he so a lot of his own personal feeling for the poem and the deeply meaning of the poem, it make me want to keep reading to see more of the feeling that he had , and what is deeply meaning of the poem. He also do good job of analysis the poem he talk about the lines, the stanza. He also include the rhyme scheme of the poem. When I read his easy I feel that he understand about the author a lot.  He can feel the mentality inside the author, and it like he can feel the same feeling with the author. The reason why he can feel the same way with the author is because he had been in that situation, the same way that the author did. He had an argument with his girlfriend everyday. He feel very tired of it, and after the fight he always feel very bad he just want to stay story to his girlfriend and show how much he love his girlfriend. The thing I love the most about his paper is he organize very logic and smart it very clear and easy to understand, he also analyst every singer stanza in the poem.

What is he need to improve :

In my opinions, I think he talks too much about his own personal feeling and focus a litter bit to much about analyst the poem. He should take more about the author feeling too. Like what is the author feeling when he/she wrote this poem. What make the author into this situation to write this poem? Maybe he can even found out the author is the he or she by analyst mentality of the author. Also is seem like he didn’t have a very clear thesis statement or I think he don’t even have one. He needs to put the thesis statement. And I think he need to include more the relationship between real life and the poem. I saw you give some example but just be more clear about that. And use more hook, because right now you don't have a very clear thesis stantment so maybe you use more hook instead of a clearl thesis. So when the people read your essay they don't get broad. If you have more hook the reader will want to keep reading to see want happen, because your hook make them want to read more and more.