Character

The character that I Like the most is Ti Moune. Because I think she was the only good character in the story, and I really like her personality, and I really impress of the love that Ti Moune have for Daniel. The love that Ti Moune have for Daniel is so strong that Ti Moune even die for her love. When Daniel get into the car acident. Ti Moune alwasy stand bised Daniel and ready to trade her life for him. After all what she did for Daniel; what is get is the cold from him and his family. In my opions I don't even thing Daniel is for in love with Ti Moune. In the end feel really bad for her, so maybe that is the reason why I love the character Ti Moune.

Once on this island

Duong Minh Anh

Ms. Guarino

English IS

28.2.2016

                            First musical preformation in my life.

If Peter Pan is the first Drama in English I have ever watch. Once on this island is the first musical preformation that I ever watch, and it was impress me a lot. I really impress because I don’t think they, the high school student just like me can preform a very beautiful musical like that. I feel like I’m watching the professional preformation.

         The truth is before I don’t really interesting on the musical very much. Because I think Musical preformation is really boring. They just sing those old and very boring songs every time, and I think I will sleep in the middle of the preformation. I don’t know we the teacher want us the go the musical. But everything has change after I go see once on this island. Everything is set up very prefect. Everything is fit the story; the light, the acting and the music was fit the story too, and was not old and boring song.  All the songs was actually very good, it’s even stuck to my head now. Sometime I even sing is out.  In my opinions I think the Drama group was working very hard to be able to get this preferment to be good like this, and they have to be very tired. Because the musical is really long, and a lot of part is singing, and those can of sound is very loud and high. For me I just need to see it one day. But they have to do like that for 3 days. I don’t know why they can do that but it was impressive. I would not be able to do that, not even one day I think.

         The thing that I love the most about the Musical is the story. The story was really romantic and very emotional; in touch everybody in the black box inclining me, and my friend Kevin almost cry. The main idea of the story is; in the small island their two sides of people. One side is rich people and the other side is pool people.  Ti Moune ( play by Julia Rafferty)   is the girls who born by god, and she get adopt by the family in the poor side of the island. She fall in Love with Daniel ( play by Ryan kim ) who is on the other side of the island. On the heavy rain day Daniel get in to the car accident and Ti Moune saw it. With the love that Ti Moune have for Daniel the god decided to help Daniel to live. When Daniel go to the other side of island. Ti Moune wanted to him so bad. So she decided to have a journey. She will go to other side of the island to find  Daniel.  All the people thing Daniel and Ti Mone will get married but the two side are so different they get not live in one house.

         After all I really love the preformation. This is my first time and I will go again next year.

        

Writing visit

Minh Anh Duong

English  ( IS )

Ms. Gaurino

25.2. 2016

                                     Writing Centre visit.

Last time when I went to the writing center, it helped me a lot in the essay. Before that I was totally loosed. I have a lot of grammar mistake; I don’t know where to start with. Then I decided to go to the writing center for helped. It was my first time went to the writing center, and I was very suspires because is helped me a lot in my essay. She teach me how to put my grammar right, and she gave the start to my essay. She even teach a lot of thing about how to put the comma, pried the right place, and more grammar that I don’t even know before. So after that day I think the writing center is very helpful, so I decide to come a again today to get help in my newest essay, and is helped my a lot once again. She teach me how to organizes my paragraph she said I should put thesis statement in last of my introduction. She tough me the title for the book must be underlined, and when I mention the book for the first time I should put the author name in. For the movie title is should be indent, and if I mention is the first time I also need to put the name of the director of the movie. I the most helpful thing that she did is; she taught me carefully about what is the different between the summaries and the analyze the thing that I found very hard.  She tell which part have to much summaries, with part need more analyze, which part is good. In my opinions I think my essay have became much better than before. Even though I didn’t have very much time with her yet. But I will come back because right now I didn’t feel proud about my essay yet.

reflect daft

Duong Minh Anh

Ms. Guarino

English IS

24.2016

                                      Reflect daft.

In my opinions I think I'm having a good start in this essay,

but I still have lot of work to do in this essay. I still feel a little

bit unhappy about my essay mostly about I put to much

summaries on it. Even through I have already changed my

paragraph (mostly the second paragraph) so many time but I

think there is still more summaries than analysis. But overall

is still better than the daft that I do long time ago. Now I can

know what is the different between summaries and analysis.

So I think I have improve a lot since the first day I wrote this

essay.  I think I need to work more on the grammar, quotes

and mainly the analysis like I said. Because right now those

three is my weaknesses, and those is the most difficult thing

I need to do in my essay .I don’t know when to use that

tence, this part should be analysis or need more summaries,

and in my essay there is not so many quotes even some of

them don’t even have connection. Those is the thing that I

very worry about, and I think I need to go to writing center

and extra help to help my improve those. But I also have

some strength that a lot of idea has come to my head

recently. Now I can just cannot stop writing but those

weakness stop me. Over all I feel like my writing has

somehow improved. For example; like I said I know what is

the different between summaries and analysis, I know how

where to put summaries where to put analysis now. Beside

that I also learn how to use the quotes correctly, and make

the quotes have connection with the other sentence.

Frist daft for tomorrow class

                                          Power of love.

The movie up, and the novel me and you are showing us how important love around us is. Love can change a other person. In the movie and the novel when they feel like they have love and care from other person; they see life more positive. They don't feel like they are useless. They change to complete different person.

 In the novel me and you. The love that Lorenzo gets from Olivia and me changes Lorenzo’s personality completely. Before Lorenzo is just a person who very quiet and unit-social. He is always has a lot of emotion but he always cannot control his emotional, so he easy to get angry. That is the reason why he doesn’t have a very good relationship with people. In my opinions; he becomes like that because he doesn't have enough love from his parent or anybody else. His dad is to busy for work. His mother and him always fight. That is one of the reasons why he decides to stay in the basement alone besides having fun with his friend in the ski trip. But he doesn’t expect that journey chances his life. There is a moment in the journey that changes Lorenzo life forever that is when; Lorenzo and Olivia dances together. “ But that evening I danced, and when I danced I felt something I’d never felt before. I felt alive- took my breath away” ( Ammaniti 146 ). That moment when they dance. Olivia gives Lorenzo the feeling of love, the feeling that he never have before. After that Lorenzo changes to other person. He becomes more out-going. He sees life more positive. He wants to live the better life to show Olivia how he changes.

     There are a lot of similar thing between the novels Me and You, and the movie Up. The main character is Fredrickson. He is just lonely old man after his wife die. Same with Lorenzo when he doesn't have the love from his wife; he change to other person. He sees like more negative. He becomes angry with anybody. To keep the promise with his wife; he decides to flight to the paradise fall with the house. Again same with Lorenzo the Journey to paradise change his life forever. Russell is similar to Olivia, and is the most important boy in the Fredrickson changing life. Same with Olivia just comes in to Fredrickson life by accident, and have a journey with him, but with the innocence, brightly of a children and mostly the love that he gives to old people and love everything make Mr. Fredrick change the way he see about life. “Wait for me! I’m going to safe you Russell” he said when Russell goes to safe the bird alone. We can the power of love in Fredrickson for Russell when he says that. He finally finds other person that loves him after his wife die. After all Fredrickson treads Russell like his grandson. He also changes to other person. He become more out-going; he smiles more; he sees life very positive, and he live in happy with Russell.

 After all we can see love is not just between boy and girls. Love can be between brother and sister, between grandparent and grandson, and we know that love can change other people life

Favorite sentence

"After all we can see love is not just between boy and girls." Over all this is my favorite sentence in my essay, because this sentence grab every main idea that I have in my essay together. Now when peole think about love they just think about the love between boy and girls. But love is a very big words. Love can be also btween parent and chirldren, btween frendship, btween grandparent and grandson. 

Frist daft

                                           Power of love.

   The movie up, and the novel me and you are showing us how important love around us is.  Love can change a other person. In the movie and the novel when they feel like they have love and care from other person; they see life more positive. They don't feel like they are useless. They change to complete different person.

    In the novel me and you, the love that Lorenzo gets from Olivia changes Lorenzo’s personality completely. Before Lorenzo is just a person who very quiet and unit-social. He is always has a lot of emotion so, but he always cannot control his emotional, so he get angry very fast. So because of that he doesn’t have a very good relationship with people. In my opinions; he becomes like that because he didn’t have enough love from his parent or anybody else. His dad is to busy for work and doesn’t have time for him. His and his mother always fights. That is one of the reasons why he  decides to say in the basement alone besides having fun with his 
friend in the ski trip. But he doesn’t expect that journey chances his life. There is a moment in the journey that changes Lorenzo life forever that moment is when; Lorenzo and Olivia dances together. “ But that evening I danced, and when I danced I felt something I’d never felt before. I felt alive- took my breath away” ( Ammaniti 146 ). That moment when they dance. Olivia gives Lorenzo the feeling of love, the feeling that he never have before. After that Lorenzo changes to other person. He becomes more out-going. He see life more positive. He wants to live the better life to show Olivia how he changes.

 There are not many different between the novels Me and You, and the movie Up. Fredrickson is the main charter. His wife is his only lover. Sadly his only lover die. Same with Lorenzo when; he is only and doesn’t have love from his wife. He changes to other person. He becomes a men who always angry; he doesn’t what to talk with anybody. He sees life in a negative way. One day he gets into a fight with the worker, because he broke the mailbox by accident. After the fight the police sent him to a nursing home the place for old people. He doesn’t want to go to the nursing room because he wants to keep the promises with his wife that he going to put the house next to the paradise fall. He is going to fly with his house with the balloon. On the way the he meets a boy name Rulless. They meet a big a storm and get stuck in the forest. It opens the big journey for him, the journey that changing his life. In the journey they meet a guys who want to get the species bird to bring back to show all the people. The way that Rulles want to protect Mr. Fredrickson and the bird makes him feels like; Rulles is a affection, and he can feel the love from him. Finally he treads Rulles like his grandson. Now he has the people that he loves; he change to other person. He sees live more positive. He becomes more out-going, and he the smile back on his face

   After all we can see love is not just between boy and girls. Love can be between brother and sister, between grandparent and grandson, and we know that love can change other people life